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Preliminary Report
Format
Below is an outline of the major elements
to include in your 900-1200 word preliminary report. Thereport
should have four main sections:
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an Overview of your project
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a Research Methods section
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a Preliminary Results section
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a Discussion section
Each of these sections must be clearly labeled
in your report, and the report must have a title. Remember that this is
a preliminary report, not a final one, so it will consist largely of a
summary of your "preliminary" research activities and ideas to date, not
finalized results. Include enough detail so that it makes sense as anindependent
document, but not so much that it exceeds the prescribed 900-1200 word
length. Save your lengthier explanations
and your more conclusive statements and insights for the oral and final
reports.
section one: overview of your
project
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First, describe your site. Set the scene
for the reader about the kind of workplace you have been researching.
What is the nature of the business or organization? Describe it in
the kind of detail that helps your reader form a vivid picture of the particular
kind of workplace you have been investigating. In particular, try to highlight
details that seem to have some specific relevance to your areas of research.
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Second, describe your primary research subject
or contact. Introduce your reader to the writer whose work is at the center
of your research project. What does this person do for the particular organization
or business? What kind of writing does he or she do? What is his
or her education and background? How old is he or she? Describe your writer
in the kind of detail that helps your reader form a vivid picture of him
or her as a person and as a writer, and again, try to focus on facts or
characteristics that have particular relevance to your areas of research.
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Third, describe the other key people you
have observed and, perhaps, interviewed. Who are they (if there is
more than one) and what is their relationship to your contact? What
do they do for the particular organization or business? What kind
of writing do they do? What is their education (if you know)? Describe
them also in the kind of detail that helps your reader form a vivid picture
of them as people and as writers.
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Fourth, describe the kinds of writing
and the writing process you have been investigating. After these
descriptions, explain to your reader what specific questions are guiding
your research. You may want to sub-divide this part of your preliminary
report into separate sections, each focusing on a particular question.
These questions can come from the three writers we have discussed so far
(hooks, Kleimann, and MacIntosh) and the handout on business vs. literary
writing styles, as well ideas that have come up for you in other ways.
In other words, describe as well as you can the specific ways you are investigating
our major themes.
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Fifth, finish off Section One by making
your own biases explicit for your reader. Example: Do you work at
the site you are investigating and already have an idea of the kind of
improvements or changes that need to be made? Do you have other biases
and if so, what are they? How might such biases influence your research?
Explain your unique perspective (your biases) to your readers, and how
that perspective might influence your work, before you begin to write about
what you observed and discovered about how writing gets done in this workplace.
section two: description of research
methods
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Collecting workplace writing samples:
Describe the kinds of workplace writing that you found and the
documents that you have been collecting; then explain how you could
focus on them in light of the questions, concepts, and ideas you have formulated
so far for guiding your research.
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Interviews: Discuss the methods
you used during any interviews, and any results so far from interviews.
How did you prepare for interviews? What types of questions did you
ask? Did any types seem to work better? As well as you can, summarize
how your discoveries from interviews relate to the specific questions,
concepts, and ideas that have guided your research up to this point.
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Observations: Describe what
you have observed of the ways people work together in your workplace in
terms of any two of our major themes thus far (socioeconomic class,
individual/hierarchical/collaborative writing, race/class/gender/sexuality
relations, and business/literary style). Describe how what you have observed
relates to the general questions that have guided your research.
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Other: Describe any other research
methods that you have used so far, including the use of library or online
sources. Remember that in the final draft of your final report, you must
cite at least three clearly useful sources that you have discovered on
your own (you may include one interview among these three, though of course,
you can include in your final report reference to more than one interview;
two other outside sources must such items as articles, web sites, e-mail
messages from discussion lists, and so on). This is a good place to discuss
examples of such texts or sources that you feel are relevant, and thereby
avoid any last minute additions that may not really help you make your
argument.
section three: preliminary research results
In this section, describe what you have
discovered so far by collecting workplace writing samples, interviews,
and observations. Make sure you relate what you have found to some
of the themes that we have been reading about and discussing in class;
you can also relate it to any outside research sources.
section four: discussion
This is the place to wrap up your preliminary
report by discussing:
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any preliminary recommendations you may
have about the way writing gets done in your particular workplace
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questions that arose that you haven't been
able answer yet
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new questions that your research raised
(that you don't necessarily have to answer), and or new problems you discovered.
Here too you might want to refer again to
the essays we have been reading and discussing in class, and to touch briefly
on the kinds of research you feel you will need to do in order to complete
your final report.